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Spilling A Secret
March 12, 2010
I am a new bird, an un-hatched egg,
Ready to explode and crack open,
Fighting to peep out and see the light.
I am the lightning bugs flying in the dark,
Flashing, and bringing excitement.
I am the flow of the ocean,
Mixing, moving, and churning.
Then everything flows out with the tide.
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This article has 10 comments.
Heyamyitsolivia said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 11:55 am
This was super awesome!! You're such a good poet!
VoiceOfStars BRONZE said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 11:33 am
Amazing. Very touching and has so much meaining
bostonredsox1888 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:59 pm
the metaphors were a great idea; and then how you described what you were in the metaphor. it was great and inspiring
Amy Alexander BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:19 pm
Thanks a lot for all the great comments. I'm really glad everyone is enjoying this piece!
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 5:00 pm
This is really good, i really like the slant rhyme and how its short and sweet, but with so much depth. Really amazing, five out of five
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 10:28 pm
very nice metaphores!!!!
this is an awesome poem!
this is an awesome poem!
whatIreallythink said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 7:20 pm
"Nothing becomes every shining thing"
have you read that book? I can't rememebr what it's called
have you read that book? I can't rememebr what it's called
DelightfullyDAZED PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:33 pm
i like how you used metaphors to describe yourself
DelightfullyDAZED PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:32 pm
i love the way you use the metaphors to describe yourself like that, very good
