can it be? | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. can it be?

can it be?

March 12, 2010
By Rosebud32 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
More by this author
Rosebud32 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"a rose for a rose, maybe the best gift of them all"

View profile

Pulse speeds up,
my ears beat,
butterflies in my stomach...
what could this be?
Because it only happens
when i am with you,
hell it happens
anytime i talk to you.
but i guess its not the same..
because you apparently
don't give a s***.
or you would be
the first to talk..
the first one there,
but your not...
in fact,
why my heart is breaking,
you're probably just out with
an other girl.

© Lauren O'D., Weymouth, MA

The author's comments:
heart breaks every time we see that other person with an other girl, it literally kills us inside.. which sucks because we just want to be over with you..
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Alone
By bitty09 SILVER
Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Untitled
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
The Top
By imperfection GOLD
Gilroy, California
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dream as though you&#039;ll live forever, live as though you&#039;ll die today.&quot;<br /> ~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

View profile
Poetry
To a Brother Growing Up
By imperfection GOLD
Gilroy, California
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dream as though you&#039;ll live forever, live as though you&#039;ll die today.&quot;<br /> ~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

View profile
Poetry
Never The Same
By sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM
West Jordan, Utah
sHaDoWnInJa PLATINUM, West Jordan, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 3 comments
View profile
Poetry
My New Beginning
By delaney95 GOLD
St. Charles, Missouri
delaney95 GOLD, St. Charles, Missouri
11 articles 5 photos 5 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.

Darley SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:18 am
Darley SILVER, Meadow Vista, California
5 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; What matters most is how you see yourself.&quot;

View profile
Great work! I really like this! keep writing. You should come check out my work sometime. i do not know why you would not like it.
Milo! said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:01 pm
Thank you! I know how you feel because all of my poems are my thoughts and feelings.
Rosebud32 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 2:07 pm
Rosebud32 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;a rose for a rose, maybe the best gift of them all&quot;

View profile
thank you! and your work is fantastic i really connected with all of it and got what you were saying! and i will keep writing because believe it or not thats the only way i can express my self! but your writing's are great!