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March 12, 2010
By Rosebud32 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
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"a rose for a rose, maybe the best gift of them all"

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Pulse speeds up,
my ears beat,
butterflies in my stomach...
what could this be?
Because it only happens
when i am with you,
hell it happens
anytime i talk to you.
but i guess its not the same..
because you apparently
don't give a s***.
or you would be
the first to talk..
the first one there,
but your not...
in fact,
why my heart is breaking,
you're probably just out with
an other girl.

© Lauren O'D., Weymouth, MA

The author's comments:
heart breaks every time we see that other person with an other girl, it literally kills us inside.. which sucks because we just want to be over with you..
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Darley SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:18 am
Darley SILVER, Meadow Vista, California
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Great work! I really like this! keep writing. You should come check out my work sometime. i do not know why you would not like it.
Milo! said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 4:01 pm
Thank you! I know how you feel because all of my poems are my thoughts and feelings.
Rosebud32 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 2:07 pm
Rosebud32 PLATINUM, Bloomington, Illinois
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thank you! and your work is fantastic i really connected with all of it and got what you were saying! and i will keep writing because believe it or not thats the only way i can express my self! but your writing's are great!