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March 25, 2010
By RyanR SILVER, Peoria, Arizona
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Star,
Your unparalleled glory held in
Blackest night's sky
Lie dazzled by abstract perfection
Keep my curious marveled stare
And guide me with divine light
As you always have
Allow me to walk cautiously across your path of
Heavenly illumination
Sound of Psalms ring
As the December morning

Your memory burned to my soul
Feel your presence as
Ignited thoughts flicker
Yearning to meet You outside
Of only silent prayers

Morning light spreads
Across the mountain tops
As the scientific sun chases You away
Restraining You from modern sights
The more the sunlight creeps
The more visibility fades
Yet I feel You here

© Abby S., New Carlisle, OH

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RyanR SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 11:57 pm
RyanR SILVER, Peoria, Arizona
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hey thanks! sorry i havent replied i havent been on in like a year but i really appriciate it!
heather_marie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 2:13 pm
heather_marie PLATINUM, Deshler, Ohio
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\\\&quot;Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you was beyond my control

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 wow i haven't seen anyone elses work that delt with God before! finally someone who understands him like i do!
ViralGirl BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 5:55 pm
ViralGirl BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
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&quot;No man can be called friendless who has God and the companionship of good books.&quot; <br /> - Elizabeth Barrett Browning

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Yup. That is so totally awesome to see that there's someone else who's not afraid to write stuff about Him. Keep it up! Oh, and if you wouldn't mind, maybe, possibly, could you check out some of my work? I really could use some positive feedback. Thanks!
RyanR SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 3:22 pm
RyanR SILVER, Peoria, Arizona
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Yes, it was completely about God.  When writing this one I tried to used adjectives that are commonly used in conjunction with God if that makes sense? :p
#1metro said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 12:05 am
I'm vibing your feel so much this is deep
ViralGirl BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 12:33 pm
ViralGirl BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
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I was just wondering; were you writing about God? Because that was the feel that I got from the wording.
RyanR SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2011 at 10:13 pm
RyanR SILVER, Peoria, Arizona
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Thank you so much for taking time to read this! It means a lot to me.
ViralGirl BRONZE said...
on Jan. 1 2011 at 12:31 am
ViralGirl BRONZE, Springfield, Massachusetts
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Absolutely stunning. I hope you're proud.