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The One I Miss

March 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)


There are times I miss your voice
All the things you used to say
I wonder if you meant it
Before you walked away

I miss your arms around me
As I dozed in your embrace
I miss seeing the smile
That would light up your face

I miss your lips on mine
So much love in that first kiss
I cannot settle for another
For it is you I miss


The author's comments:
This is one of the many poems I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me.

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Trolllollo said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 9:49 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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i loved it i know a lot of people can relate

on Apr. 25 2010 at 12:44 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Just live your life, if people don&#039;t like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it&quot; &quot;if you can&#039;t stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best&quot;

Oh my Lord, I love love love it

on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:01 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

thank you:)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:28 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees.&quot;<br /> -Che Guevara

I liked it, very concise

on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:32 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

Please comment any advice is welcome:)