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March 8, 2010
By xangielovex PLATINUM, Skillman, New Jersey
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xangielovex PLATINUM, Skillman, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
My heart is broken<br /> My words are unspoken<br /> My tears are saying all that needs to be said.<br /> Thoughts and feelings through my head,<br /> How dare you do what you&#039;ve done to me?<br /> How could one guy cause all this misery?

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Why does my passion
for you burn
so fiercely,
While your passion
went out
like a light?
Was it the shock,
the sudden gust
of a surprise
that extinguished
your love for me?

The author's comments:
Another one that was for Mike. Pretty old, ammiture. I don't like it very much. But it had good use of metaphors..
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