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Unfathomable Love

April 4, 2010
By RickiCharlie PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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RickiCharlie PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I’ve already been to heaven….and after 5 minutes I was like let’s go"

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I see you every day, hour, minute, second
You stare at me every day, hour, minute, second
But yet you show absolutely no emotion what so ever...
Yeah I get it...I'm venting again but I can’t help it…
You changed me in unfathomable ways
But you don’t care…do you?
I know you don’t but I wish you did

I’ve been in love with you from death
Yes, I know it makes no sense but trust me it does
I’ve loved you for 2 years and if you knew…it would be in the vein of death to me
It kills me…every time I see you it burns...
Like fire it scorches me
But I don’t care because you’re my inferno
But you’ve been with her for 4 months…you say
I know you don’t care but I wish you did

© Alyssa R., Pacific Grove, CA

The author's comments:
Ive noticed that most of my inspiration is from this one person but one positive thing that came from it all is that Im writing great poems.
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