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April 11, 2010
By jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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If I die don't
tell them

They will know already

Because my desicions have
shown em'

Desicions that i took slow an steady

They have already tied me down to get me sane

It's always too late to put out the flame

© Emma J., Tuck, GA

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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 10:09 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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okay, i dont want this to sound rude so i'll say this first:i love depressing pessimistic stuff. with that being said, i love the last line. its like the most negative depressing "give up and die " thing i've ever heard. i love it. 5 stars captain.oh, i like the whole thing too. do your dance.
Lexiiscool said...
on May. 29 2010 at 8:24 pm
OH my GOOOSSSSHHH! i like it alot, so 5 stars for this!!
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 11 2010 at 7:08 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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That would be great.. but im not wishing on a star or anything...

 

im just hoping ha!

thanks(:

Poemgirl said...
on May. 11 2010 at 12:22 am
This needs to be published! it yearns to be!! iits just screaming "hey you ..im ovaa here!!publish me already hahaha"
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:42 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Yah, but i'm going to do this book first-it has a better plot and i know more now (than when i was writing the other one) you know?
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:40 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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articulate, poetically yeah:) ch-ching.
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:33 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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"penstrokes of a poetry master"? yup ill take that(: ahaha

i totally agree with your whole statement there on a monolog of pure nothingness..

keep writing because everything you write is written with immense feeling.. and i can tell your very articulate(:

jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:30 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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You DEFINATELY should.. you'll regret it if you dont.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:24 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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you have the penstrokes of a poetry master-someone who can give us a few sentences of meaning instead of monologues of pure nothingness....5 stars captain. and the last line is very nice.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:19 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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yah i'm trying to write a book -i'm finishing planning it out so that this summer all i have to do is write and then idk what i'm going to do to publish it-i started a book that was 99 pages when i was like 10 but i never finished-maybe i'll pick up on that again!
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:16 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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7th grade? its good that your starting now! i wish i did!!(:
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:15 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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7th grade and i live in Missouri
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:12 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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I know right! what's up w/ that????
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:11 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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7th and i live in Missouri-where do you live?
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:04 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Yess!all true!

what grade are you in?

Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:02 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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yah. Because there's just so many articles on this sight!!! I can't wait until mine are posted!!! I'm so impatient!!I love seeing that there are all of these peotic, artsy people because i am the only one in my grade.
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:58 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Haha i know!... its but the good writings are always hard to find.!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:51 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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I totally know how you feel-i keep reading a lot of good peoms where i'm the first one to comment-its like-hello? where is everyone-read these!!!!
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:47 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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oh no ..i have older friends who did ahaha.! But i just wish more people would read my poems! i want them too be published soo bad!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:46 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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Wow, that's a great story!!! YOur friends got scholarships when they were freshmen??