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their forceful eyes.

April 18, 2010
By redfishcatefish SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
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redfishcatefish SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
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haha well it's something i came up with. "sometimes it takes the fall to realize the top ain't much better."

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people view me
as a falling item;
im something to
look down upon.
and it's going
rapidly.
i am.
the bottom,
without much farther
to go.
their eyes push
me deeper, into
the dark, lonesome
pathway of
Shattered.
my toes can almost
touch.
and my hands
grasp to turn
glared, so i might
make another moment.

© Kat M., Rockville Centre, NY

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