Angels | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. Angels

Angels

April 20, 2010
By mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
More by this author
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
11 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars. &hearts; ♫♪♫♪♫♪<br /> &quot;believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... &quot;

View profile

Angels in the sky
Way up high
Angels in the sky
I wonder why

Whose in heaven?
Who all goes?
I don't even know!

Is my dog that died there?
Is my grandmother there?
Is my grandpaul there?
My uncle or gold fish?
Am I just being childish?

Angels everywhere
Angels soaring through the ksy
Way up high
I wonder why

© Xiao H., Naperville, IL

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this poem was the recent knowledge that my grandmother has alzheimer's, and has less than a year to live. God bless! I love you gran! ?
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Alone
By bitty09 SILVER
Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Overcoming Stage Fright
By kiwi12 PLATINUM
Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
View profile
Poetry
Lost now found
By BarrelRacer GOLD
Huber Heights, Ohio
BarrelRacer GOLD, Huber Heights, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bring The Challenge or Eat My Dust.

View profile
Poetry
One Piece... One Destiny
By Matt Groy GOLD
Park City, Utah
Matt Groy GOLD, Park City, Utah
11 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Cracked vase
By Dale CROUCH PLATINUM
JOPLIN, Missouri
Dale CROUCH PLATINUM, JOPLIN, Missouri
29 articles 9 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
what is it?
By stardom21 BRONZE
Suisun City, California
stardom21 BRONZE, Suisun City, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.

mysterywriter11 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 1:09 pm
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
11 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars. &hearts; ♫♪♫♪♫♪<br /> &quot;believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... &quot;

View profile
hey, don't copy me :P
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 14 2010 at 10:32 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

View profile
i like the image you painted a picture of. everybody wants to walk outside and see a bunch of people flying around in the air. this is very nice captain. you have a way of reaching my heart. i think i'm going to adopt you.
timevampire GOLD said...
on May. 12 2010 at 1:35 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

View profile
I agree with the above. The whole idea is amazing. I might just use that :)
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:24 am
Lover_that_Hates DIAMOND, Reynolds, Georgia
76 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;She was fascinated with words. To her words were things of beauty, each like a magical powder or potion that could be combinded with other words to create powerful spells.&quot; From: Lighting(By: Dean Koontz)

View profile
i like the idea in this passage, but the writing is a little confusing, you seem to switch from poetic to just talking, and it doesnt flow as well as it should. But the idea of "who are the angels and why are they up there?" is really cool! keep writingt what you feel.
mysterywriter11 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:17 am
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
11 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars. &hearts; ♫♪♫♪♫♪<br /> &quot;believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... &quot;

View profile
i meant to put sky instead of ksy! sorry :D