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The Unposted Comment

April 5, 2010
By Mr_Anonymous SILVER, Ripon, California
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Mr_Anonymous SILVER, Ripon, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;...There&#039;s no defense<br /> except all the errors<br /> made...&quot;<br /> <br /> -Excerpt from &quot;Claws of Paradise&quot; - C. Bukowski

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I read your work
Amazing
I loved it
I experienced what you showed to me
And I could relate

I wished to express my gratitude
*Click*
New Comment
*Type*
I begin to say
How much this meant to me
But stop

I can't find the perfect words
To fit this perfect feeling

Reluctantly
I click close
Without ever telling you
How much you changed my life

© Matt Bullock, Highland Village, TX

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