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I'm Like A...

April 21, 2010
By CourtneyJ GOLD, Columbia, South Carolina
CourtneyJ GOLD, Columbia, South Carolina
17 articles 11 photos 7 comments

I’m like a cool glass of tea
On a summer night
Delicious and refilling

I’m like a breeze of wind against your cheek
Sculpting your bone structure
Massaging away all problems

I’m like the stars
Shaped into a drinking gourd
Guiding runaways through darkened nights to freedom

I’m like love
Never seen but lives within the depths of souls
That sweetly plays a tune toward its lover



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on May. 13 2010 at 2:07 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

very nice, good metaphors. comment on mine sometime?

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 13 2010 at 12:51 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

I love it!!! You're so talented!            Although I think you should add about 2 more " Im like..." before the last one, but seriouslly God bless!

Check out my work! ;)


on May. 12 2010 at 10:51 pm
Tiffanie_ SILVER, Sedro-woolley, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not tell me the sky is the limit. Because there are footprints on the moon

aww! This is a VERY good poem!! Keep it going! 

 

p.s you should comment some of my poetry? haha