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Raindrops Flood My Broken Heart

April 25, 2010
By Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
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"Forgive and Forget".

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I have been here with five years of rain,
Looking out of the window and seeing pain,
The sky is gray day after day,
Seeing the sun I have to pay.

Locked in a dark closet with no path,
Going out there is like taking a bath,
When the sun is out the other children play,
I have nothing to say,
With flowers blooming up,
Sunset rising is like gold in a cup.

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

The author's comments:
The inspiration for this poem was reading All Summer in a Day by Ray Bradbury.
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Ninten1992 PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 10:34 pm
Ninten1992 PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
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Thank you so much! :)
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 4:51 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

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woww. ur really talented. plz keep writingg