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The Journey of Life

May 15, 2010
By MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, try again."


The journey of life is a road that each one of us must travel on.
We’re given choices to make.
We’re given visions to take and engrave in our hearts and minds.
The journey of life takes us to many places.
We also see the many faces of new and familiar people.
The journey of life is a road that each one of us must travel on with no regrets or fear.
We must travel many miles.
We must vanquish the hardships and trials that life throws our way.
The journey of life is a road that each one of us must travel on to learn the truth about our selves.
We must take in what we can.
And learn the origins of our past.
We’re the ones that must find the key to the door of truth.
For the door of truth reveals the essence of our true selves.
The journey of life is a road that each one of us must travel on.


The author's comments:
Life really is something that everyone can relate to. I wanted to try and write something where everyone can relate to it. I think of life as like a journey. In video games when you're playing the main character, you travel to all sorts of different places and meet all kinds of people. You also come across some conflicts in the game. And in reality, we do that same sort of thing. That is what inspired me to write this.

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on Jun. 26 2010 at 12:23 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Your welcome, and thanks for checking out my work! (;

on Jun. 10 2010 at 12:11 pm
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, try again."

AW! Thank you so much! Your comment made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! :)  And sure, I'd love to check out your work!

on Jun. 10 2010 at 12:08 pm
MoonlitxRose BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, try again."

AW! Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad that you liked it!

on Jun. 8 2010 at 8:39 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This poem is very down t earth and real. I love the first two lines...' The journey of life is a road that each one of us must travel on. Were given choices to make.' That is so true! ( Would you mind checking out some of my work? I would lave to have your opinion!) (: Your a great writer, and I hope you keep writting!

on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:22 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

This is so true. Loving the way of the flow and how you make it seem :) Nice work.