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How Does It Feel?

May 29, 2010
By Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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How does it feel?
Are you hurting?
In constant excruciating pain that just keeps growing inside you.
Do you hate yourself?
Knowing you'll be scarred for life.
Wishing that there was a way to bandage the wound and fix the hole that its made inside you.
Wanting to set back the clocks of time, and change everything from beginning to end.
Some people think that you're crazy.
But to you, they just don't understand...they don't know how it feels.
If there's one thing you could change, it would be how you've become.
Because you're afraid...
to start over and make things new.
So how does it feel,
to have you're heart ripped out?

© Kristy K., Milford, CT

The author's comments:
I guess this piece was inspired by the thought of love, and the emotions that come with it.
I'm not in love though.lol
I just wanted to write about it.
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Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:41 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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haha. i will

 

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:54 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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oui oui captain. do your dance.
Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 2:49 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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haha. well thanks for the compliment.

maybe i do feel like that when i write

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 3:27 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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i know captain, thats why i like your stuff. thats a good way to write, or a good way to feel when you're writing.
Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 1:14 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Haha. wow. Do i really??

Thats a good way to describe my writing.

 

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:28 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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you sound bitter and angry like you want revenge and you're watching a helpless guy get mawed by a bear like"well what do you know, you're dying. oh well, so how does it feel". you sound so nonchalant about it and teeth griting at the same time.
Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 12:20 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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who do i sound like??
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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merci captain.
HollyGolightly BRONZE said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 7:36 pm
HollyGolightly BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
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That was very beautiful. Keep doing what your doing.
Nirvana SILVER said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 2:59 pm
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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thanks very much!!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 12:43 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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you know what you sound like? I'm not even going to tell you what you sound like.-this is very nice captain. 5 stars.