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Is He the One?

June 13, 2010
By MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
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MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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I've always wondered if he was the one.

The one who would risk his life and dive in front of a bullet to save me.

The one who would never leave me in a dangerous situation.

I've always wondered...


His soft hand gently carresses my cheek as I smile.

He tells me he loves me, and will always.

Every time I see him, he holds me in his arms, and swings me around lovingly.


Each time I'm with him, I feel my life and soul, both, are complete.

I simply tell myself that,"...nothing could go wrong. This moment is perfect."

And thinking back, those precious moments always were.


Smiling now, I can imagine no better times in my life.

Being with him always makes me happy.

So, going back to my question; Is he the one?

Well, considering the previous, I'd say yes.



Yes, he is the one.

© Mariana O., Tecate, CA

The author's comments:
I really have no specific person I wrote this for, or about. I just thought of this question one day, when I was thinking about the guy I liked. I was trying to figure out if I really did like him, or wether I only liked him for his cute looks. And, from that question, I came up with this. XJ
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MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 12:27 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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Thank you! :)
bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:12 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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this is amazing n beautiful at the same time
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 11:48 am
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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Yeah, I guess so.
Mourningwolf BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 4:20 pm
Mourningwolf BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
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yes same with me! i mean with the most i submit are drawings..... however it takes a while for the people to look over an image also
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 12:10 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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Yeah, I agree. I mean, if they know that things are backed up, and taking forever, they should get more help. The waiting for articles is always so much longer than for pics and drawings, though. That's, good. Sort of, I guess. For me, because most of the stuff I submit are my drawings.
Mourningwolf BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 6:12 pm
Mourningwolf BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
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thats very true but still.... they should have a little more people working on authorizing them to make them go through faster or something
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 3:07 pm
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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Yeah, that's probably one of the only bad things about TeenInk. It's because there are so many imaginative, and creative kids/teens out there, that create so much stuff and submit it, that everything is slowed down. I guess it's a good thing, because people are making some awesome articles and artwork, but it just takes patience, I guess.
Mourningwolf BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 6:25 pm
Mourningwolf BRONZE, Clermont, Florida
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Rise and Rise Again until the Lion Becomes the Lamb.

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o wow that is a really long time!

 

MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 11:27 am
MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy SILVER, Chardon, Ohio
7 articles 56 photos 356 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;One heartbeat.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Our scars remind us of where we&#039;ve been; they don&#039;t dictate where we&#039;re going.&quot; <br /> -SSA David Rossi, Criminal Minds

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MourningWolf,

 

Thanks! I so happy, though, that it was finally approved. It's been pending approvel for over a month. I'm glad you like it!

 

~Cordie~

Mourningwolf said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 8:02 pm
Very nice!! I like it alot!! Its very inspirational and sweet :)