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Steep Hills

July 3, 2010
By bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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Steep hills
And valleys
With the love and support from all
She will again realize she is loved
And wanted
You may feel your words
Of hope and strength
Are the sounds she isn’t listening to?
But your words will soon
Built up in her head
And conquer evil thought
She will soon blossom,
And live life of
Love
And laughter
Over again.

© Elizabeth B., Wichita Falls, TX

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bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:19 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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yup that is how i feel every single day
bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:19 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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i will comment your work huney thankz for comments mine
bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:18 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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thankz you so much it means a lot
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 5:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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wow this is so thoutful and deep i love it!!! if you could please comment and rate my work that would be great!! especially to anonymous!!!! thanx and ur really good!!!!
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE said...
on Jul. 19 2010 at 8:06 am
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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&quot;What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?&quot; Mary Oliver

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this so deep. i loved it!
tbaby13 said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:25 pm
tbaby13, Toccoa, Georgia
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&quot;Every one says mistakes, but I say another lesson learned&quot;

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i thought that it was really good. Keep up the good work!!

 

bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 3:12 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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ya i am the she in this poem
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:15 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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&quot; You can&#039;t make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it&quot;

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Oh, btw spelling error: change built to build
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:14 pm
distressed_cinderella PLATINUM, San Leandro, California
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&quot; You can&#039;t make something stay that wants to go. You can only love what you have while you have it&quot;

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In don't know why, but I felt myself catching my breath when I read this. Nice job..may I ask are you the she who will soon blossom?
bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 3:01 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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thank you so much ☺☺☺
Sencere BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 12:55 pm
Sencere BRONZE, Annapolis, Maryland
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Why am I fighting to live, when I&#039;m just living to fight. Why am I trying to see when there ain&#039;t nothing in sight. Why am I trying to give when no one gives me a try. Why am I dying to live, when I&#039;m just living to die.

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I like it 4 stars