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you said foever
June 23, 2010
what happened to forever
you seemed so clever
the way you kissed me
i thought you could see
how much you meant to me
i thought i was your everything
but it turned out i was nothing
you promied never to leave
and i begged please
but you still didnt see
if you knew how i felt about you
you would be so blue
but i see you didnt get the clue
that i really really love you!
© Elizabeth G., Marblehead, MA
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