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June 17, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.

© Nicole G., Weymouth, MA

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MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:01 am
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Isn&#039;t it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

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This perfectly describes my boy friend actually, very lovely.
crazyShruti BRONZE said...
on Mar. 27 2013 at 3:30 am
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Nicee work. i love it :)
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Beautiful! I love the vivid imagery and the captivating comparisons. Awesome job; A++!
Pargaran SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2012 at 7:29 pm
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&quot;Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don&#039;t matter, and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&quot; <br /> -Dr. Seuss

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ADORABLE!!
Loooooved it. :)
pen_ups said...
on Sep. 11 2012 at 8:59 am
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I really like this poem , it's short and sweet and so true. 
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Very Very great, especially so short
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Great worK! Makes me happy:) haha
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:32 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Thanks !!!!!!!
Just_Me96 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 9:57 pm
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This is really good =)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:18 pm
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Thanks so much!!!!
AndreaD GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 5:13 pm
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i like this one a lot :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou so much!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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ThankyoU!!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou so much!!!!
Laura16 GOLD said...
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Awww... this is so good and so sweet! I really liked this and your other work too!
valeriemarie94 said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:37 pm
amazing :)
naliba BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:16 pm
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I liked this very much, it says so much in so little. Bravo! 
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks so much!!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks np!!!
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One word AMAZINGGG