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Love.

June 17, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.


Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.



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on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:04 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
44 articles 0 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation&quot;

wow really good :).

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!

on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks !!! ;)

on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:11 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

beautiful words bout love....it was aa beautiful poem

on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:01 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awwwwwww =..) very sweet!! i liked it alot!!! beautiful word choice there :)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks :)       

emigini said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:31 pm
emigini, Irving, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is friendship set on fire.&quot; - Jeremy Taylor

aw, i like this a lot. the imagery is beautiful. 

on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:57 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:56 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

Awwwww! so sweet!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!!

Zzzie SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:08 pm
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Think positive, or I&#039;ll have to start singing.&quot;

Very good! :)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:22 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

i will!!! thankx!!!!

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on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:38 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
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Very nice....I love it!Please comment and rate mine if you can..i've only one work right now though,others are pending...

on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:13 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 7:23 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
11 articles 4 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures.&quot; Jessamyn West

Wow that was really amazing! I loved it and the ending was like the cherry on top! =^_^=

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:41 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanx thats so great!!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:40 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks soo much!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 7:37 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
79 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The heart has its reasons which reason does not know.&quot; -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

Again, I love it, esp. the last three : "On a Sunday afternoon,/ Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,/ I love you." They made this poem for me. 5 stars and a Favorite! Keep it up :) You have such a talent!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:20 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

omb!!!! girl this is gooooddd!!!! you have such emotion sewn into the seams of this poem!!!! itz magnificent! keep it up!!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:07 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou soo much!!!