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June 17, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Love is a double-edged sword,
A figureless carousel of dreams and hopes and broken glass.
A piano missing all the keys, and yet,
Singing a melody of tears.
Love is a great, big, thump!
Right in the center of your chest,
That swoons you left to right in embarrassment.
And,
Love,
Is a mysterious figure,
On a Sunday afternoon,
Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,
I love you.

© Nicole G., Weymouth, MA

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Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:04 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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&quot;we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation&quot;

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wow really good :).

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crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks !!! ;)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:11 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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beautiful words bout love....it was aa beautiful poem
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:01 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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awwwwwww =..) very sweet!! i liked it alot!!! beautiful word choice there :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks :)       
emigini said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:31 pm
emigini, Irving, Texas
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&quot;Love is friendship set on fire.&quot; - Jeremy Taylor

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aw, i like this a lot. the imagery is beautiful. 
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:57 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks!!!!!!
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:56 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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Awwwww! so sweet!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou!!!!
Zzzie SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:08 pm
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
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&quot;Think positive, or I&#039;ll have to start singing.&quot;

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Very good! :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 10:22 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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i will!!! thankx!!!!
Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:38 am
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Very nice....I love it!Please comment and rate mine if you can..i've only one work right now though,others are pending...
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:13 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou!!!
Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 7:23 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
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&quot;Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures.&quot; Jessamyn West

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Wow that was really amazing! I loved it and the ending was like the cherry on top! =^_^=
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:41 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanx thats so great!!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:40 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thanks soo much!!
despurlock DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 7:37 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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&quot;The heart has its reasons which reason does not know.&quot; -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

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Again, I love it, esp. the last three : "On a Sunday afternoon,/ Who brushes his hair back with two fingers and says,/ I love you." They made this poem for me. 5 stars and a Favorite! Keep it up :) You have such a talent!
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:20 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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omb!!!! girl this is gooooddd!!!! you have such emotion sewn into the seams of this poem!!!! itz magnificent! keep it up!!!
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:07 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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Thankyou soo much!!!