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Avec Toi

June 20, 2010
By BradTastic17 GOLD, Russell, Other
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I just ate an entire box of Lucky Charms cereal and I swear to god I can see into the future. ~Kurt Hummel

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Je t'aime et je t'aimerai toujours. Plus encore que vous ne le saura jamais.

Je ne peux pas vivre sans toi.

Je meurs quand tu dis que tu m'aimeras jamais en arrière.

Je suis désolé de quitter.

Mais je crois que je suis plus désolé je suis revenue encore.

Je ne peux pas vivre avec toi.

Je ne peux pas vivre sans toi.


Je ne peux pas vivre...
Ne vous sentez pas désolé pour moi,
Je suis déjà mort.

© Steven S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I do not ordinarily speak French, nor do I ever do it well. There are probably a lot of mistakes in this.
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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 6 2011 at 8:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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ton ecritures sont tres bon captain. tres bien. fait ta danse.
BradTastic17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 12:39 am
BradTastic17 GOLD, Russell, Other
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Thank you, I'm glad it turned out... well, better than I thought it would.
LoveTravelTell GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 10:27 pm
LoveTravelTell GOLD, Leftoverthere, Florida
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No, it was really good. :) I had to use a translator but it translated without sounding awkward, so congrats.

A little morbid, but in a very good way. I believe I understand the feeling, for different reasons.