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i need you "mommy"

June 14, 2010
By softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
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Does it have to be this way?
Hatred, that was once love,
when i was young...
I love you "mommy"
I need you to act as my mother, but,
you don't and you won't.
I want.. to feel the love you give to her, my younger sister, who I resent.. because she takes the love I should also receive.
I give so much, and i get nothing in return.

© Kyle W., Pompton Plains, NJ

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softballbabe2014 SILVER said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:26 pm
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
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&quot;Smile now, Cry later.&quot; &quot;everything happens for a reason&quot;

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I'm sorry to hear that, I'm also sorry to be getting back to you so late!
NaomiPikalek GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2013 at 1:44 pm
NaomiPikalek GOLD, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
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my relationship with my mother is the same way.
Snowflakes SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2012 at 4:02 pm
Snowflakes SILVER, Lichfield, Other
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This was quite sad to read. No one should ever feel like they aren't favoured !
But I do like how you've wrote it :) 
MaggieClaude SILVER said...
on Sep. 5 2012 at 7:58 am
MaggieClaude SILVER, Randolph, Massachusetts
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This is such a unique peice. I hope she comes to her senses and gives you the love that you also deserve. :)
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 28 2012 at 6:51 pm
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
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favortism, hate it (if that wasn't clear)
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 28 2012 at 6:50 pm
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&quot;You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that&#039;s the sad truth. Maybe they&#039;ll break your heart, maybe you&#039;ll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That&#039;s the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly...&quot;<br /> -Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

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favoritism >:(