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I love you, I love you not.

July 2, 2010
By beautiful_but_torn GOLD, West Jefferson, North Carolina
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It&#039;s all make believe, isn&#039;t it? <br /> Marilyn Monroe

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I love you
I love you not.
I love the sweet words you say,
I hate the stupid games you play.
I love you
I love you not.
I love it when you compliment me,
I hate it when you talk about her.
I love you
I love you not.
I love your beautiful eyes,
I hate the way you look away when you lie.
I love you
I love you not.
I love the way you love me,
I hate the way you like her.
I love you
I love you not.
I love it when you make me smile,
I hate it when you make me cry.
I love you
I love you not.

© Emily B., Houston, TX

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Simply put, realationships are confusing.
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sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 7:10 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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This is good. I like the premise, but i think it would have been  better had you not put "I love you. I love you not." after every point. Good job though.