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My Eye's Reflection
July 7, 2010
Wiping the steamed mirror,
a reflection appears.
My haunting eyes stares back
Black pupils are deep with horror,
shallow with guilt.
There used to be something there
hope, will
I don't remember which
but now, i only see the end.
© Brian B., Highland Village, TX
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luckypachyderm SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2010 at 11:44 pm
so far, this one is my favorite. i love then ending especially. your very talented, its not easy to convey so much in such a short poem. well written
MelanieLouise PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 9:30 am
thank you. and i will check out yours too :)
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:19 pm
i really like this!! good job! i have to say the other one was my fav. out of the two though!! you have alot of talent!! don't stop using it:)
MelanieLouise PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:01 am
thank you so much :)
through my eyes said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:07 pm
out of all your pieces i like this one, i like the emotion that it conveys, and its short and simple. great work :)
MelanieLouise PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 1:47 pm
thank you for your feedback. i knew it was a little off but i wanted someone like you to tell me what i needed to change :) ya know how it is when you look at something for a while and you can't anything wrong or right about it, well thats how it was with this piece. thanks again :)
thezebrasgray PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:32 am
being totally honest, i dont like it. i sorry, i know that it sounds rude but, the flow isn't quite right. i do like the message though
MelanieLouise PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:20 pm
aww thank you !
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 7:48 pm
you did an amazing job with this:) i like the simplicity of it, and how it goes on to mean so much more. great job!
