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July 8, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

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I see him,
And I think of you.
Same eyes
Same hair
But he would never do
what you did.
He would never break my heart.
After all,
He was the one
Who helped me put it back together.
And when I start falling
For HIM
He's there to catch me.
Which I can never say you did.

© Torey B., McLean, VA

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I wrote this when I was falling for another boy when my boyfriend broke up with me (request)
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 6:30 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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thanks that means a lot
bkcrider92 GOLD said...
on Oct. 15 2010 at 1:02 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

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&ldquo;When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.&rdquo;

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Ur a really good writer! Great job never stop writing cuz u got talent! ;)
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 5:13 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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hanks so much for the comment and the rating. that means the world to me!!

 

God bless you!!!!

distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:38 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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Wow I love this poem!! I can understand how you felt and what you were going through! Great Job!!!
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 1:50 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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thanks... i think! lol thank u so much it means alot to me!!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:56 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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This is one of those poems that makes you feel confused, but still understand, if that makes any sense :P Relatable and honest, as per the norm!