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July 31, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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I’m here thinking
I’m here pondering
You have got me twisted
I try to shield this away
My thoughts of missing you
My voice in my head
Pounding through the walls of my mind
For some odd reason
I can’t bear to break another heart
Of another fool
I have done many ungrateful things
Hurting guys
Left them to cry alone
Always been faithful to all
But always leaving them behind
With all the lost tracks of my steps
You keep on investigating
To know where I’m going
But you always get so lost in my life
I would kiss you through the phone
Lead you on
Like how I will be feeling
For you
I’m in love with you
With many different reasons why
I do
The way you comfort me
The way you’ll never leave me
Sitting alone with tears to fall
I never had tears to fall
Like I did to every heart
I broke and crushed
Burned into ashes
Smelling the salt from all the tears
That was once dropped from them
But you are different
I don’t want to cry for you
I want to comfort you
I want to please you
I want you to be happy
I want you realize you are nothing
Compare to a Edward Cullens
Because you are greater
You are the one and only Joe
I love from California

© Mollie D., Stacy, MN

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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:07 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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k...i  will.thank you very much
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 7:07 am
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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thank you vvery much n will read youor writings. n i dearly appriciate the comment. it means a lot
chastity SILVER said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:06 pm
chastity SILVER, Beckley, West Virginia
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take me as i am or take me as i leave

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this is amazing work check some of mine out
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:48 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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&quot;The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud.&quot;- Coco Chanel<br /> Life isn&#039;t about surviving the storm, it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.

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This is so amazing!!! love it!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:21 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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aww thank you very much...i luv ur comment.lol but i deeply appricate it chica. oh yeahhh i can't spell
monnie BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:23 pm
monnie BRONZE, Mauldin, South Carolina
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&quot;you dont know wat you have til you lose it all at once!!!!&quot;

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its absolutley amazing i love every bit of it
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 6:44 pm
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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LOL XD Ah well nice for you to think of the readers XD Your welcome.Love how you wrote that XD sum LOL, nice.
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 6:20 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awww thank you....he's nuthin but better than edward cullen, u know alot of gurls be crushin on him dats why i add it. a lil flavor..hahhah lol but thank you greatly to give me sum feedback<3
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 5:58 pm
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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That was really good! Wow! Hah loved the edward cullen thing you put lol! That was really good I relate in some many ways. Thanks for writing it good jod!
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 5:42 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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AWW thank you,it means alot seriously but yes ill read dat poem n ill give u sum ffeedback. thank u very much
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:34 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I love this!! (Especially the first 15 lines or so :) Really great - sweet and honest and relatable.  Could you check out my poem "Your Name & My Heart"? I'd really appreciate some feedback..Thanks so much and please keep writing!
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:17 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awww thank you...it means alot for ur comment n ur thumbs up:) i greatly do appricate it<3 im glad when people be tellin me that they could relate to it cuz theres always sum1 who could relate to sum1 in the world
StarStrukk said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:13 pm

This is really good I have to say, and in the beginning, you actually reminded me a little bit of myself. Two thumbs up :)