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July 20, 2010
By silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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I am speechless
I have no words
my mouth wont open
you left me speechless
you hurt me
you crushed me
I thought we were on the same team
But im wrong apparantly
So im speechless
with no words
I dont know if i'll be able to talk again
You're a trader
But you're not worth it
worth the trouble to open my mouth
So i'll stay quiet
and walk away
because....
thats what you did

© Jessica P., Bethel Park, PA

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Lucy(: GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 9:16 pm
Lucy(: GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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i feel like you really laid out the words for us so much that we didn't have to think or put any puzzle together. it was like staring through clear glass

that can be very effective, a poem that makes sense and people can relate to. i love most poems where its hidden beneath, but this is a great poem for its simplicity and strength.

amazing (: check out my very small amount of work too ?

mask456 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 5:41 pm
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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I liked the meaing of the poem and keep writing its a wonderful way to let ur inself out i really liked it.

 

And hey please comment on my wrk!

Bella_142 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:35 pm
Bella_142 BRONZE, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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wow that is just amazing, i could feel the emotion when i was reading it. good work.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 3:55 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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You know this relates to me some how, I love it, !! Great job :)

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Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
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Very well written and a bit sad. Silence is much more complicated than is credited by those who speak.