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Blades

July 25, 2010
By Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go"!


As u dragged the blade across ur wrist praying for courage to press down,
u realized its not worth it and u through it down,
Whats the point of ending ur life when u don't know whats in store,
all the things u could do all the people u could help,
and yet u still get the urge to cut ur wrists,
u see the blood start oozing and u get scared and throw it down again,
u don't know when u'll get the courage but ur hoping it'll be soon,
U can't take life it's too long of a walk u dont know what to do...



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on Mar. 29 2012 at 11:31 am
Valerie Sanchez, NonyaBizniz, Texas
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Greeeeat. (:

Just pick up your grammar and it's good to goo~


on Nov. 18 2010 at 9:16 am
CandiceLauren17 GOLD, Burlington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I'll die when it's my time, So let me live my life the way I want to live it :) "

Pretty emotional there m'love, but it's great job:D<3

Vanessa said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 5:20 pm
wow this almost made me cry great  meaning

on Sep. 10 2010 at 3:03 pm
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go&quot;!

thanks see i am used to msn slang and i had this wrote on my computer for awhile and i forgot to write it right lol if that makes sense

on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:06 pm
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
30 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

Haha, well, the whole "u" instead of "you" thing should be changed at least...and you used "through" instead of "threw" too. =)

on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:56 am
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go&quot;!

is there anyway i could fix it up without getting it approved again     and there is such thing as poetic lisense so does it really matter??=) and thanks

on Aug. 25 2010 at 7:33 am
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
30 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

Great Job! But as A.Dreamer said, you should definitely fix up the grammar. Keep writing!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:18 pm
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go&quot;!

thankyou = )

on Aug. 23 2010 at 7:25 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

I liked the meaning of this, and I thought it was very well written! If you fixed up the grammar, it would be absolutely amazing! Good job writing this!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 4:30 pm
Escapethefate GOLD, GT, Maryland
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t regret life,<br /> Live life.

okay! I will!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 3:40 pm
Damara...C GOLD, Mings Bight, Other
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Accept me for who I am, or, watch me as I go&quot;!

thanl you so much i appreciate u reading my stuff i am waiting on 7 other things to be accepted now two short stories and five free verse poems check them out

on Aug. 23 2010 at 3:29 pm
Loves this :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:01 am
Escapethefate GOLD, GT, Maryland
12 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t regret life,<br /> Live life.

This is really good, and it has good meaning to it! You can write!