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One Little Simple Perfect Kiss

July 24, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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One little simple perfect kiss -
Changed everything between us.

One
(Well okay,
Technically it was two.
Three? Several?
Who was counting?)

Little
(Um.
It was kinda a big deal.
Our first kiss.
After all the almosts.)

Simple
(Ehhhh.
Maybe sort of complicated.
We swapped emotions
Instead of just spit.)

Perfect
(Hmmmmm.
I thought it was perfect.
What'd you think?
What is perfect anyway?)

Kiss.

© Samantha A., Southbury, CT

The author's comments:
Its soooooo easy to over-think a little simple perfect thing....As I illustrated above! Lemme know how you feel! <3
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alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:53 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Haha well the fact that my first kiss was with him made it perfect for me but I don't think it did for him ://///
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:42 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Haha :D Thanks, and even if the first kiss wasn't PERFECT, close enough right? :)))))
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:41 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Haha this is really great and they're right: it's creative too! It kinda reminds me of my first kiss....minus the perfect!!! I'd do anything to fix our kiss ya know maybe undo and retry!!! haha
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 5:09 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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great job i rememer wen u let me read this and i loved it so much... now i fell in love with it again great job!!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 3:21 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Thats what I was going for :) Thank ya much!
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 10:22 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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complicated...yet simple at the same time. but,,,,i loved this. its so creative the way you wrote it. 

keep writing. 

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 3:46 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Lol. Good to know :P And thats not really creepy :D
just-ryan said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 11:53 pm
just-ryan, Garfield, Washington
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well, you kno one, not personally, but at least over this website... sounds creepy tho
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 7:46 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Lol. I know what you mean. And I REALIZE that there are guys like that (who are emotional and still cool) but I can never seem to find any! :( Lol. Thanks for the comment :)))
just-ryan said...
on Aug. 20 2010 at 2:54 pm
just-ryan, Garfield, Washington
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yea bro, i mean, we are guys, but like a lot of girls keep telling me about theyr boyfriends n such, "all guys are the same" hopefully someday they will realize, there are some guys who actually think, and feel a little. and can still play sports, or be in a band, or still fight (legal or illegal), and can still run a normal teenage life you kno?
Amiee said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:04 pm

lolz thanx, my first thought was, wat the, is is girl psychic or sth?, but than i was like, o right stupid me... well thanx for reading my profile~ hehe^^ i would have liked to say read my stuff but i'm new and my stuff are still "pending approval" arggg when does it get published!!!! well, thanx

ps. canada and korea IS awesome hehe

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:29 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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You're Korean?! Thats so cool. My guy/boy)friend is Vietnamese :) AND you play soccer? Me too!! Lol. And Canada is pretty awesome. Just saying! Lol. Sorry to attack you with all this random stuff :P
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:25 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Aww thanks! You're so sweet! :)
Amiee said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 2:06 am
wow, this is soo good! i mean, it's sooo truthful and relatable
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:28 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Lol. See comment above. Does that answer your question? :)
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:18 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. Its good to know guys think about things like this too :)
just-ryan said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 11:44 am
just-ryan, Garfield, Washington
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I like it man, I know what your saying, I can feel the questions flowing in my own mind. It makes me wonder about my first kiss, and all the other girls I've kissed for the first time, its the exact paranoia, the exact confusion, that i can understand as a reader.
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 10:03 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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I love this!!! Relatable! I wonder if guys think like this...

Did you put rocks in my socks??? I think you did!!!

 

AL!

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:51 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Yeah. Raw emotion is usually easier to relate to, so I figured, why not see whose attention I can catch? Thanks for the comment!
lauraclaire848 said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 5:21 pm
lauraclaire848, Suffolk, Virginia
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Aw this is the cutest thing :) I was smiling the entire time I was reading it! They're such raw emotions too; obviously none of it is sugar-coated which is nice. Haha I just love it!!