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You said "forever", and I believed.

July 28, 2010
By Sammyjayx3 BRONZE, Belmont, New Hampshire
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His eyes get me each time.
He sees one side of me.
The first kiss was the best.
Not good enough in his eyes.
Your choice, My pain, My loss.
To forget you isn't a choice.
He doesn’t even know…or care.
What I WILL remember, he WON'T.
YOU said forever, and I believed.

© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA

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This was a bunch of 6 word poems that i put together to make one poem.
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