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Without Goodbye

July 26, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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I love your jet black hair
And yellow skin.
Your cinnamon brown eyes,
And your perfect grin.

I love your determination
And the muscles in your calf.
Your no-nonsense attitude
And your loud, genuine laugh.

I love that you’re smart
Without even trying.
The way your lip twitches
Whenever you’re lying.

I love your flirty comments
Used in front of your friends,
And your nervous expression
When we’re too alone to pretend.

I love your seriousness for soccer
And how you play all the time,
How you still look adorable
Covered in grime.

I guess you needed someone
Who wasn’t so shy -
You didn’t know that I love you,
So you left without a goodbye.

© Alyssa R., Pacific Grove, CA

The author's comments:
Ehhhh. This was something I had to write to help me get over someone I really care about. I still have feelings for him, but this helped me face how things really are. Have you been there? Lemme know with a comment!
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alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 6:49 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Yep I surely do..... and now you know who I'm talking about...read Passion again and look at how I describe him....
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:48 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Now do you know who I'm talking about? (Thanks) :)
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 12:45 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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I have been there and I still have feelings for him but he doesn't know and he probably won't he probably doesnt care. Love hurts. Wonderful poem! This is exactly how I feel! You put your feelings into words so perfectly too I love it
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 5:07 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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great job but thats not out of the ordianry!! again i love the way you put this into words!!!
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 3:46 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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You're welcome!

And awww, thats so sweet, I'm sorry it ddnt work out though. :(

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 2 2010 at 3:19 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Ahw thanks so much! I really appreciate it :) Its the little details about him that captured me in the first place, so I decided to devote a poem to just that. Even though it didn't work out in the long run, I'm glad I wrote it. :/ Thanks for the comment! :D
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 10:14 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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OMG. 

I totally fell in love with this one. 

Very descriptive and wonderful imagery. Love how you captured the little details about this person. It's perfect. Keep writing. !

btw, i have been there. <3:)