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The Moment After

August 10, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

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Photos.Pictures.
They trap the moment.
Sometimes I wish I had
The courage
To rip up the ones we took on
THAT DAY.
Rip them up
Like you did to my heart on
THAT DAY.
But I kinda want to remember
THAT MOMENT.
The one when we are happy.
Not the one that
Came after the pictures.
Because
THAT MOMENT
I wish I could rip up.

© Natalie D., Marblehead, MA

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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:15 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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awwww... thanks!!
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:07 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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hansk again  and im sorry i wrtie to good for you lol JK!!! thanks again for the nice comments!!
bound4life4ever PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 1:00 pm
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
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Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.

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u need 2 stop showing off nd write some not-so-good poems sometimes! =) lol..jkjk

amazing again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really relate to this w a previous guy..-_-

love it=)

 

ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 12:00 pm
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I really like this poem and hope everyone can relate to it like you and I do. :)
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 4:09 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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thanks!!!! thanks for all of your feedback!! it means a lot to me!!

 

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 3:05 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Amazing - Super relatable. Short, sweet and to the point. Nice job :)