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Can I say I love you.?

August 10, 2010
By forbiddenxwords SILVER, Van Nuys, California
forbiddenxwords SILVER, Van Nuys, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Fear will never overcome you, if your will to succeed is strong enough" From "The greatest salesman"


Look into my eyes, and you'll realize how long ago the real me has died.

These tears are not just tears runnin' from my eyes,

These tears leave scars from this life bein so hard.

Look at the stars and I bet you will find my heart, just as bright as it would shine.

It's a start but i love you.

It's hard to show you how real it is,

Because of all this pain blocking my path.

I hope you know how much you are missed.

Just thinkin bout you gives my heart bliss.

I heard someone talk about you today,

And all I could do was look away

Today is the day I find you

Today is the day I tell you everything.

But since I don't know where to start,

But I guess I LOVE YOU comes straight from the heart.


The author's comments:
Im not sure how to describe this one. Im horrible at words, but I hope my poetry helps explain how I feel just a little bit. I cried all night before this poem came to me. Me and my girl wrote this. (I wrote it, she read over it and made a couple changes) My first poem written with another. Ihope you enjoy/enjoyed it.

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