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September 12, 2010
By BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
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BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
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The people are flooding in,
comming in great big waterfalls,
and gathering in puddles.
when they go away later today.
ill get to go home,
oh how i long to be alone......

© Mike V., Morgantown, PA

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BriBear BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 9:54 pm
BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
4 articles 18 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
If i was perfect they'd have to redifine the words

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i will happily read some of ur poems...

i thank u very much! :) i had to do this for a school project and i felt that it ws one of my favorites :)

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:10 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I'd be delighted if you would read one of my poems.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 7:10 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I, as well, liked this poem very much. This was partly because I can identify so well with the feeling, but also (of course) because it is written so well. I like how you described the patterns of people (in puddles and waterfalls). Well done!
BriBear BRONZE said...
on Oct. 5 2010 at 3:12 pm
BriBear BRONZE, LaFayette, Georgia
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If i was perfect they&#039;d have to redifine the words

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thank u so much. :) i never thought someone would actually ay that about my writing. ill check out yours definatly
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 7:00 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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&quot;Don&#039;t cry that it&#039;s over, smile because it has happened.&quot;

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wow, you are SUCH a strong writer. shortening this poem made every word a prize, and it definitely was.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing