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Whay you have done

October 6, 2010
By RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

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I was an outcast
A heart amongst the spades
But you made me an insider
Another bird in the flock
You told me when to turn the other way
That sometime it will be my day
My days were long stained with depression
But now I can turn the clock
Morning to night
Evening to afternoon
My heart to be no longer desolate as a moon
I found where I am meant to be
Finally together with my family
Being with you is always fun
Now you know what you have done

© Anna Y., St. Robert, MO

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This is a about how my best friend took me in when i was in my darkest state
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This article has 18 comments.

RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:11 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

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If anybody could give me some constructive criticism that would be epic. I want to get better as a poet in the making and the only way to do that is to be critqued
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:39 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

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Thanks! ^.^
amsscoobydoo said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:07 pm
Thats pretty good...i never knew you could write good like that
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 7:14 am
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

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Thanks man
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 7:10 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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:D ^.^ thats uber epic

 

thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 7:05 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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&quot;Don&#039;t cry that it&#039;s over, smile because it has happened.&quot;

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hahah nooo. those compliments were definitely sincere!
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 7:01 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Its like a program that post stuff or does stuff 4 u without u doing any work.Alot of people use it for advertisement but ur not now i know that so thanks :D
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:46 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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whats a bot?
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:26 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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I cant tell if your a bot or not but thanks! :D
Status= Happy Camper! 
thewriteidea DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 6:01 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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this is so good! i absolutely loved it. you are such a great writer and i love reading your work.

rate/comment on some of my work too if you'd like. great job. keep writing!

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 3:36 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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nobodys chastizing you captain. do your dance.
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 12:59 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Thanks alot. You have no clue how much that meant to me
ModestMusic BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 10:45 pm
ModestMusic BRONZE, San Clemente, California
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You poetry is already fairly epic!! Good work!
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 7:05 pm
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

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T.T just realized I misspelled what in the title
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 8:31 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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I'm waiting for you captain, not that i fully understand what the word epic means but...i get the idea.
RayOD GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 2:46 am
RayOD GOLD, Millersburg, Ohio
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Man kind must end war or war will end man kind.

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Thanks. My poetry will soon become epic with practice.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:15 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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funny, i was waiting  for something like "i'm dead, thanks alot." i guess now you see what poetry made me. eitherway, i still love it captain.do your dance.
trblue GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 8:08 pm
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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your AN was no need.

i could tell from your word choice

that your were take in @ your

darkest moment. i like your line 2