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Doesn't he realize

September 29, 2010
By HaileyBaby123 SILVER, Happy Valley, Oregon
HaileyBaby123 SILVER, Happy Valley, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"What the caterpillar thinks is the end of it's life, the butterfly knows is just the beginning."


…that with every word he says, he makes me feel less and less of a human.

I am a person with rights and feelings.
You need to acknowledge them.
You brought me into this world,
and you’re on your way to pushing me out.

Has anyone ever had their father tell them they hate you? That you’re worthless to them?

It isn’t right.

Despite the arugments.

Despite the swearing.

Despite everything.

That just isn’t something you say.


The author's comments:
My father and I got into a huge fight, and when he was intoxicated, he told me he hated me.

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on Oct. 12 2010 at 1:47 pm
HaileyBaby123 SILVER, Happy Valley, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"What the caterpillar thinks is the end of it's life, the butterfly knows is just the beginning."

it did. thank you so much.

just recently, this fighting turned into physical. so now i'm not living with him anymore.

everything i write comes straight form a personal experience.

 


on Oct. 10 2010 at 1:32 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

wow, from reading the caption i can tell that this poem came from the heart. i'm so sorry this had to happen to you. but you are a great writer. i love this piece

rate/comment o some of my work too if you'd like. keep writing