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Beautiful Soul

October 13, 2010
By jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. &quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Crying doesn&#039;t indicate that you&#039;re weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive.&quot;


Her love is so beautiful
It drenches me in
vanilla twilight
its like a nightmare
cause i care for her
she is the apple of my eye
she is a angel that glistens
when she laughs
when she is near its like heavy
drops of atmosphere falling
her voice is a lovely tune
in my head
her love is in the eye of
her beholder
she is sweet and
delicate as a flower
she stops the pain
in the blink of an eye
her love is as strong
as an ox
she is as beautiful as
a falling angel
she is as good as a female fox
her smell lingers on me like flowers
her body is as slim and
curvy as a guitar
her tattoo on her chest protects her from her heart getting broken like an iron fist


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on Mar. 7 2011 at 12:15 pm
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. &quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Crying doesn&#039;t indicate that you&#039;re weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive.&quot;

send me some of your work please

on Nov. 4 2010 at 4:49 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

No problemo!!!! If get a chance would you mind checking out some of my work? Thanks!!! :)

on Nov. 4 2010 at 10:48 am
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. &quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Crying doesn&#039;t indicate that you&#039;re weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive.&quot;

thanks for comments from you

on Nov. 4 2010 at 10:48 am
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. &quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Crying doesn&#039;t indicate that you&#039;re weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive.&quot;

thanks for comments from you

on Nov. 4 2010 at 10:48 am
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. &quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Crying doesn&#039;t indicate that you&#039;re weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive.&quot;

thanks for comments from you

on Nov. 4 2010 at 10:47 am
jamesacolson PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
22 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, Courage to change the things i can, and Wisdom to know the difference. &quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Crying doesn&#039;t indicate that you&#039;re weak; Since birth it has been a sign that you are alive.&quot;

thanks for comments from you

on Oct. 26 2010 at 6:21 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

Awww this is beautiful and very sweet! The last line is my favorite definately and I agree that you could improve on "as good as a female fox" and "strong as an ox" other than that i loved it

inspir3d GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 2:12 pm
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We&#039;re all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We&#039;re all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

this is really sweet and the thought behind it is good, but there's some things that could be improved. For instance, "as good as a female fox"...doesn't really make sense. Also, were you listening to Vanilla Twilight by Owl City as you were writing this? i could tell.

on Oct. 25 2010 at 7:55 pm
spirit_bound GOLD, Clarmore, Oklahoma
18 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The human spirit is not measured by the size of the act, but the size of the heart&quot;

i like it alot, i could really feel the emotion as i read this, keep writo=ing, your very talented

 


TWLOHA SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 1:37 pm
TWLOHA SILVER, Seattle, Washington
5 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am Strong because I am Weak<br /> I am Beautiful because I know my Flaws<br /> I am a Lover Because I&#039;m a Fighter<br /> I am Fearless because I have bee Afraid<br /> I am Wise because I have been Foolish<br /> ...and I can Laugh because I&#039;ve known Sadness

This is good and I love really the last line,,.