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Memory Lane

October 16, 2010
By CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
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If music be the food of love play on!


Every song reminds me of you
Every song makes the tears fall
They flow down to my cheek
Down to my chin
It's like getting stabbed by the most tiniest pin
But you bleed so much and
You scream all of your hurt sooo loud...
It makes you go insane
On memory lane
Now their are no more hugs and
Never to be kisses
Thoes are uncompleted wishes </3



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on Feb. 13 2011 at 7:51 pm
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If music be the food of love play on!

more personal? ok i'll try it! thank you!

on Feb. 1 2011 at 10:38 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
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&quot;Out of a world of laughter, <br /> suddenly I am sad.<br /> Day and night, it haunts me,<br /> the kiss I never had&quot;<br /> --Midsummer by Syndey King Russell<br /> <br /> &quot;Chances lost are hope&#039;s torn up pages&quot;-- &quot;Chances&quot; by Five for Fighting

oh, no, it's fine. It almost made me start crying. I think you should a little more "story" to it, more background. Maybe it's just me, but making it more personal (in some respects) makes it more meaningful. But otherwise, I think it's pretty good :) keep it up!

on Nov. 11 2010 at 4:16 pm
CarveTheMoon PLATINUM, New City, New York
30 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
If music be the food of love play on!

Sorry I didn't notice that i spelled some wrong GAH! -__- i'll do better next time! and now i feel like re-writing part of it cuz 1 part sounds weird 2 me but it would take soo long for it 2 get published again... sorry people who look at this and go ugh!....