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Permanent?

October 28, 2010
By SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.


How unflinching,
Is the bittter pain,
Of deep and sorrowful,
Inner shame.
It nisther forgives,
Nor dains to relax.
But holds unbending,
It's prisoner to facts.
To torment,
Slowly.
For years on end.
It knowingly,
Reminds.
It will not forget.
But dares it's victim,
To try and overcome it.


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SMWells said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 6:34 am
You might be surprised when I tell you,outside my family your the first person who seams to relate. Nice of you to coment.

on Nov. 15 2010 at 8:10 pm
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
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When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in<br /> <br /> <br /> ~Unknown~

Shame is a relentless mistress who locks you in her tower and reminds you time and again of your mistakes in various forms of torture. Trust me i've been there, and she is so cruel.

on Nov. 14 2010 at 7:27 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

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Some truths best left unspoken.

 

Thank you from my heart for trying to help. I don't know if I can make use of your advice,but I'll think on it. And thanks again!


on Nov. 14 2010 at 1:14 am
Drizzle29 SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
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Life has taught us that love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction. ~Antoine de Saint-Exup&eacute;ry, Wind, Sand and Stars, 1939, translated from French by Lewis Galanti&egrave;re

this poem kind of confused me... i didnt exactly get its message until the very last lines. and you might want to check your spelling and grammar because there are a few typos! for your next poem i suggest clearing things up and fine tuning it!