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Our End

November 7, 2010
By CarlaMarie GOLD, St.Marys, Other
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It’s over.
I can’t believe it,
You said that
This would last.
You promised me
Forever,
What changed?
I must have done
Something wrong,
Or stopped doing
Something right.
Because if I
Didn’t
You would still
Be with me,
Right?
So yea,
I’ll take the
blame,
I realize that
It’s my fault.
I’m sorry
For what went
Wrong,
I hope you have
A better life
With me
Gone.

© Danielle L., League City, TX

The author's comments:
Break up poem. Nine months, down the drain. Inspiration? A broken heart.
What do I hope people will get from this? Don't take advantage of what you have. It won't last forever. No matter how many times he promises it.
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Marylouisegarner GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 10:34 pm
Marylouisegarner GOLD, Applegate, California
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I can honestly say, with my emotions for the past three months, this poem is exactly what i have gone through
blackamethyst GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 7:59 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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This poem is good and relatable. I can definitely identify. Keep writing