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Love is Unbreakable

November 10, 2010
By iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

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Quiet country roads
Or busy city streets
In the winter snow
Or in the summer heat

This you should always know
I'm with you near and far
It doesnt matter where you go
It doesn't matter where you are

There holding your hand
Or a million miles away
Toes burried in the sand
Or outside the Milky Way

Space between doesn't exist
We're as close as we could be
Love is deeper than the abyss
Love is above the tallest trees

This i vow to you
You will never be alone
In the most familiar places
Or in the most unknown

© LZ A., Grand Junction, CO

The author's comments:
This poem started out nothing like it turned out to be. I was just thinking about 'near or far'. A lot of my poems start out that way, or I'll just get the first line or two and the rest forms.
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SaraTreece said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 9:47 am
SaraTreece, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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I love this peom. Great way to decribe this. I really like stanza 3
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 11:27 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure.&quot;

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thank you :)
Carrich BRONZE said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 10:46 pm
Carrich BRONZE, Leesburg, Virginia
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I like this alot! I agree ^^ it was smooth and i loved the imargry. Keep it up!
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 4:23 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure.&quot;

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thanks for the support! greatly appreciated. :)
breeeegreen BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2010 at 2:06 pm
breeeegreen BRONZE, Watsonville, California
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this is beautiful. i love the words you used, amazing how they flow together. and i agree, love is unbreakable.