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Fragile Body MAG

November 14, 2010
By daughterofliterature GOLD, Portland, Oregon
daughterofliterature GOLD, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"If music be the food of love, play on." Shakespere


My big toe dips,
a chain reaction
of goose bumps
creeps up my
wary leg.
My muscles tighten;
a sensation between
pain and relief
spreads among my
flexed thighs.
My nostrils flare
due to the
unexpected satisfaction
of warm
steam.
My body is submerged;
the pinching of
my flexed muscles
is released as my
spine slowly adapts
to the arch of the tub.
My mind is a white canvas,
a white canvas
waiting for
self-criticism,
confusion, and
hate. But it
receives nothing
but the comfort
of warm liquid
encompassing
my fragile body.


The author's comments:
the bathtub can be so inspiring.

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on Apr. 18 2012 at 4:46 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

Wow you made getting into the tub so poetic~

rkguth said...
on Dec. 2 2010 at 12:08 am
i looove this! great images and sensory details :)