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My Fault

December 12, 2010
By WriteON SILVER, Grand Meadow, Minnesota
WriteON SILVER, Grand Meadow, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That&#039;s why they call it the present.&quot;<br /> --Oogway from Kung Fu Panda


I made her this way
The rude remarks and repetitive swearing
Her usual facade of
Not caring, no apologies
And it is my fault

Her heart has frozen over
A fear for a while
But I know there has to be a reason
There is a fear she also has
And that is my fault

I wish I could go back
But doesn't everyone?
Erase my many selfish mistakes
Take back my coldness
Because it is my fault

I have realized the reason now
For I used to be he cold-hearted one
She looked up to me and watched carefully
And that is exactly why
It is all my fault



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on Dec. 15 2010 at 2:47 pm
QuiltCocoon BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ithaka by Constantine P Kavafy<br /> The Answer by Carl Sandburg<br /> I Taught Myself to Live Simply by Anna Akhmatova<br /> Comes the Dawn by Veronica Shoffstall

It makes me homesick and sad for a little sister I never had. Ha. That rhymed. But seriously, I love it :)

on Dec. 14 2010 at 8:34 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

freakin' awesome. "a fear for a while"-thats my fav. line. it sounds profound, like you just came out of college with brand new scar tactics and you're secretly taking over the world.do your dance.

WriteON SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 5:33 pm
WriteON SILVER, Grand Meadow, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That&#039;s why they call it the present.&quot;<br /> --Oogway from Kung Fu Panda

Thanks so much! :)

on Dec. 14 2010 at 9:21 am
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
9 articles 3 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot&lt;3

Wow. I really like this peice(: keep writin'(: