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Falling Too Hard

November 13, 2010
By alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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When I fall,
I fall hard.
With him I'm falling off a cliff.
I try to catch myself with my arms.
It hurts like hell.
But better two broken arms,
Than a broken heart...
Right?

© Sophie P., Potomac, MD

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Funny how guys make us feel huh?
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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 9:10 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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only thing is then people would be like wheres boos, i dont want to cause any confusion, especially for new people that might read my stuff.
alanacarlene said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 4:20 pm
Pfft you're not alone! I can't remember the last time my writer's block lasted this long!!! It's driving me insane! I don't sleep well when I've writer's block! It sucks huh but thanks again 'havent written idea ages' great idea for screename for someone with writers block!!! Lol
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 12:38 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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well i mean yeah, the last three lines in your poem. ithought it was the perfect comparison. i wish i didnt havethis stupid writers block. i wanna changemy screen name to havent written in ages, though i dontthink thats grammatically correct. dont care though.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 9:45 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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haha "of freakin course" good stuff love it! That's hilarious how you related the undermining of something dramatic and deadly with "oh, my mom just shot at me, but hey shes my mom right?" with my poem! Thanks nice stuff! :D
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 8:39 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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What the front door.

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of freakin course captain. of freakin course.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 6:44 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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HA! well thanks Glad you "love"ed this! long time no comment captain! Good to read from you again thanks for commenting!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 6:29 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

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I love this captain. it sounds like your undermining something dramatic and deadly like, "oh, my mom just shot at me, but hey shes my mom right?" i love this.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 4:09 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Thank you! :) Yeah this totally happened to me like 2 summers ago...darned steep cliffs!!! -.-
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 21 2010 at 10:10 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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Man oh man can I relate to this. "With him I'm falling off a cliff." Short, sweet, and relatable as always :)