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Winter Takes Another V i c t i m

December 5, 2010
By SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
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SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
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"My pen is the barrel of the gun. Remind me which side you should be on."

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A solemn tree stands alone,
Branches bare.
Except
For a single, brown leaf.

It clings to
Just a thin, snow ridden branch.
Merciless wind blows against the
Nearly dead leaf.

Quite amazing,
Really, how long it has held out.
Under such harsh conditions, it
Viciously hangs by a thread.

Yet, it's not strong enough. With sudden
Zeal, the leaf flies off into a cold, wintry night.

© Anton J., Philadelphia, PA

The author's comments:
Look at it again. See a pattern? The first letter of each line is in alphabetical order, skipping two letters every two lines. At first, I unconsciously did it, then decided to continue with the pattern.
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JustAnotherOwl SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 11:06 am
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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The imagery is great in this poem! Wonderful, really! Great job! :)
leafy said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 1:39 pm
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Ooh nice! I like the unique pattern and the inner meanings 5/5
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I like the pattern :) this was really good :)
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Nice!  I like the pattern you used.  And the imagery in this poem is excellent as well. :)