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Friend, Foe, or My Love?

December 13, 2010
By JATBZ GOLD, Winfield, Kansas
JATBZ GOLD, Winfield, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.&rdquo;<br /> Mark Twain


When we are close,
I have to wonder is this her?
Do I really have a chance?
When I see her face all I think is,
Will this be my closest person in my life?
Do I need to push?
When we hug,
I never want to end,
But does it really mean anything?
When we talk I have to wonder,
Is this my angel?
Is this perfection?
...... But, when I think all these things,
Am I good enough?
Will I pull her down?
Does she even look at me,
Or just see me as one of many windows?
Good to have but, could live without.
What do I do?
I love her happiness and her,
but her happiness and her security much more.


The author's comments:
There is this girl I like, but not only I don't think she likes me, I don't think I deserve her. Comment about the writing or advise, if you please.

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 7:54 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;In the end, it&#039;s still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what&#039;s available. It&#039;s still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who&#039;s around. It&#039;s still best to wait for the right person, because life&#039;s too short to waste on the wrong one.&quot;

nice....was wondering who this is?? I am in your class of 2012 also.