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An Electric Current, Dancing Lips, Flushed Cheeks, Bold Grins :)

December 22, 2010
By Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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&quot;If you love life, don&#039;t waste time, for time is what life is<br /> made up of.&quot;<br /> <br /> -- Bruce Lee

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How do you describe this thing that happens between us –?
And why is it called a kiss?
When happiness overflows,
And more than perfection exists.

The chemistry and friction
Electrical energy in between,
Drawing us together like magnets
Or some other force, unseen.

Your lips on mine, and mine on yours,
Making up for time spent apart,
Dancing a well-choreographed number
To the beat of each other’s heart.

My cheeks flush with happiness
As your hand caresses my face,
And I pull you tight against me
Closing that unnecessary space.

We break apart and I smile
And you return the grin,
I weave my fingers through yours
And let the aftereffects begin.

How do you describe this thing that happens between us –?
Made up of an electric current, dancing lips, flushed cheeks and bold smiles?
Why is it called a kiss?
Maybe because there’s simply no shorter word
To label this uncontrollable bliss.

© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA

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Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 10:53 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Whoa whoa whoa.. Lets not get crazy :P This is NOT better than anything you've ever written. Puh-lease. Haha thanks tho :P
ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 12:42 pm
ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
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&quot;Don&#039;t cry because it&#039;s over,<br /> Smile because it happened.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> -Dr. Suess

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I totally love this and it rhymes!(: i don't know why you said you suck at rhyming because this is better than anything i have ever wrote!
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 10:24 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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This is just plain beautiful. I lalalove it!!!!  It's one of your best!

God bless! :D

Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 9:57 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Aww :) Well I REALLY hope it works out for you :) And thats a GREAT quote!! 
alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 5:06 pm
well the guy i'm crazy about either hates me for what i did to him or is scared to get his heart broken again. i just wish he knew how i felt about him. he gives me butterflies and make my heart skip a beat when i see him and (corny alert) makes it hard to walk cuz he kinda makes my knees weak lol! but i saw this thing (which is now the background on my computer) that says "Never give up something you can't go a day without thinking about." so i'm not giving up on him...i'll wait...
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 3:57 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Really good :) Yep still goin strong :D I'm really happy. Its nice to like someone and KNOW they like you back as much or more than you like them, ya know? Knowing the feelings are returned.. :) It was never like that with a certain someone else...

How are you? Hows your situation going?

alanacarlene said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 6:14 pm
awwww haha so how are yall doin? still goin strong?!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 7:15 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Haha. Thanks so much! I actually started this a LONG time ago, but there wasn't any real feeling in it so I just saved it.... Lets just say now I recently experienced some feelings I could put into it :)
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2011 at 5:49 pm
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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oh.....m...gee.....! Alex! This was sooooo beautiful! definately my favorite from you now! I really really felt:

Your lips on mine, and mine on yours,
Making up for time spent apart,
Dancing a well-choreographed number
To the beat of each other’s heart.

I could see and hear and feel that stanza! and i also absolutely love the last stanza! those were my favorites! gosh i can't describe how great this poem is!!!

"Why is it called a kiss? Maybe becuase there's simply no shorter word To label this uncuntrollable bliss."

Perfect