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Beaten Love

December 27, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;


Had me fall for you then you broke my heart
Now watch me step on yours... tear it apart... slowly burn it
It’s not revenge; it’s getting my heart healed
You're immature you just want me to suffer
But I swear by the maker of the sun by the creator of the person you're
That I’ll make you cry bloody tears over me!
You won’t have my heart again, over my dead body!
Don’t you tell me you're alone and I was to be your all
Don’t you step forward... It kills my dead soul
You... look at my eyes because you know that’s my only weakness!
You... hold my hand because you know that’s when my heart beats!
You... kiss my lips because you know I can’t hesitate or disobey
You... touch my body because you know you get me lost...
But don’t you think that weakness occurs anymore
Don’t you think your magical kiss gets you all you want anymore?
I was too dumb to think its real love and only believe
Don’t you call me baby it only shows that I’m deeply naive?
I want to say it but I can’t... I want to let go but you’re the air I breathe
And now you're only forbidden from leaving your hands in mine
So I won’t remember you, though I can’t forget you, my addiction!
Don’t you look at my eyes... don’t you fill my desire and need with lies?
I promise... you will come crawling to my feet begging for forgiveness
You will learn what it’s like to have someone your only weakness
You will realize that I am to be your source of happiness
And you will taste the true definition of sadness
Now you know who you're and what I am... A princess!


The author's comments:
I only wrote this because I still love you, but I dont know how else to tell you I want you back though please dont come back . . .

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Shahed GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 1:09 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

Aw, thank you! :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 14 2011 at 10:18 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

Honestly when I write, I personally dont know how the poem will end; Thank you so much! I try my hardest for it to reach out for other people! :)

on May. 14 2011 at 4:59 pm
OriginalCarbonation GOLD, Naperville, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
dream as if you&#039;ll live forever<br /> live as if you&#039;ll die tomorrow

this poem has a raw quality about it. its so emotional and moving. it caught me up in it and completly took my attention. yet it was unique and didnt turn out as i expected. i really felt connected to the poem and truly enjoyed it. very nicely written :)

Tina L. said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 7:14 pm
Wow! I had to turn my music off, and read this again! "it's not revenge, it's getting my heart healed" love it!! wonderful!