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Inside
To you, I reach out,
Help me from this place.
Grab my hand, now,
Steal me from this haze.
Help me live,
Save my live.
Help me outlive,
This sacrafice.
Bring me back to live,
My heart is too cold.
I'm dead inside,
Or so I've been told.
Save me, please.
I need to be released.
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Save my life**
Not
Save my live
Sorry, typo.
Hi.
First off, thank you for reading and posting a comment.
Second, this is mainly about being isolated by loneliness, almost like being locked in a cage, and desperately wanting to be saved by someone, anyone. It doesn't matter who, just having this feeling of needing to be saved.
I wrote this because my mother makes me feel like I'm in a cage, just by the things she says to me. She makes me live in loneliness and pain. And, this kind of reflects how I feel about that. I wrote this write after me and my mother got in a fight one night.
Thank you for the amazing comment! And thanks for reading! :D
great work!
my school has recently made this program where they will publish good short stories and poetry. i am in desperate need of a storyline since my deadline is fast approaching. could you please tell me what inspired you to write this poem. i am trying to find rich substances and raw emotions to create something from and i think pain and loneliness is something most of us can relate to. it would mean a lot to me if you could tell us whata this poem is about and what inspired you to write it. i hope to be able to write poetry someday as well as you can.