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Dreams

January 14, 2011
By tracker27 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
tracker27 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as I have strength left, friends by my side, and the will to succeed, it's not over yet." -myself


The night closed in

The lights go out

And the fantasy shall begin



The woman that confuses me

Also infuses me

With a weird emotion

Someone calm this commotion



This feeling rising above

Could it actually be.. Love?



Ask me whats going through my head

It's better to tell you what's in my heart

As i lie, motionless in bed



I think of her

And her speechless Art



What exactly is my heart telling me?

Is it simply just a fantasy?

Or is it a prophecy?

Is this destiny?

What exactly does this mean to me..



She challenges me

Pushes me

Wants me to be

Just what exactly?



You introduced me to the unseen

You apeared first nice, then mean

Will the ends justify our means?

How did we come to these dreams?


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on Jan. 27 2011 at 11:36 am
tracker27 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
45 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As long as I have strength left, friends by my side, and the will to succeed, it's not over yet." -myself

Thanks! ur the first person to comment on any of my work sothank u for taking the time to appreciate it:) that means a lot to me. and i'll definitelycheck out ur work:)

on Jan. 26 2011 at 4:38 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

Very cool portrayl (I think I spelled that right.........) of dreams. Beautiful, I can relate.. with the way you composed Love into dreams.Check out some of my work if you can ,thanks :)