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Dear snow, i begged you to go

December 16, 2010
By aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Oh snow
Why must you flow
Into flakes of death traps on the floor below

You laugh as I fall
Turning my pink scarf into a white dull
Exploding my finger tips into numb icicles

I drip down into the door
Onto my now slippery wet floor
Because of you I am cold and sore

Yet you don’t shed a tear
But you should begin to fear
For the sun will rise and your death is near



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on Feb. 1 2011 at 6:13 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Interesting :) I like how it was composed.

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on Feb. 1 2011 at 9:56 am
GraceK SILVER, TENAFLY, New Jersey
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Hahahaha this is cute!!!I love it so much ahahahah it's funny and yet truthful and valid!I love it.....and I too would want the snow to go,right now.Iam African and not used to it,too cold!!

on Feb. 1 2011 at 7:21 am
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us.&quot;- Lestat

Quite wonderful! I love your work and see, know the image you try to grasp! Sadly, I never experienced snow... being down in the south. Sucks =/

But keep up your work.

If I may ask a small favor. You will check out some of my posted poems and stories. Rate/comment it doesn't matter. Thank yew.